Ben Gregson: "The contents page index is really good but the images are a bit too clustered but it over all looks good"
Abbie Mgrath: "I really like the way the colours contrast with the pictures and i like the way the bright colours give it a positive and encouraging vibe, i like the way you've put in slang to get across what target audience its for, however, I think the first photo is a little too crowded and in your face, and the second picture is too blank, Maybe turn it into a split page and put some of the photos on the first page and turn it into a news article about justin bieber relationship with Selena or something? It's really good on all the other notes. Also, maybe instead of putting 'it's super cool init' why not put like where the clothes are from and how much or something"
Janine Lewis: "I think the magazine it's self looks very professional and clean! The colour scheme and pictures come in very well and blend well together. The only thing i'd say is that the blue on the cover doesn't really blend in but i'm probably wrong! But yeah, i'd say that's good if i seen it on a shelf in Asda i'd be tempted to buy it.
Kyle hughes: "You have a consistent house style which creates a professional look for the magazine. The direct mode of address in the images attracts the reader's eyes and draws their attention. To improve the magazine, i'd suggest changing the font's to an easier to read colour or add a stroke effect"
Kyle Parr: "I think the banner on the top of the front cover is too big, try and get a smaller one then that is cool:)"
Lucy Skeggs: "The house colours are good and kept throughout the whole magazine! The pictures are clear and just from them we can see it is a music magazine with a target audience of about 12-18 teenage girls. The bold writing on the front page attracts our attention to the main parts and also on the contents page"
Karl Graham: "I like your cover lines because they make us think about what happens in a pop stars life. Your pictures also show that it's a music magazine because of the props, you also maintain the colours through out the magazine which is good"
Kayleigh Allen: "I really like the way you've kept the colour scheme throughout and how they are bright and standing out colours that are eye catching and appealing! I really like your pictures and the positions and poses you've got your model to perform. The only thing i'd suggest is maybe fix your pictures as they look abit stretched. Other than that, I really like it! And also i'd say the target audience is 12-18 teenage girls! "
Jenny Smyth: "Looks amazing Kirstie!! your masthead on the contents page looks abit stretched. Also try adding some page numbers and an editor and name of editor. Apart from that its brilliant!!"
Michael Duffy: "More text on the double page spread, use less bright colours to. Overall it's layed out nicely and does not look unorganised"
Katy Blake: "Looks good kirst, front cover is very eye catching with the bright colours. You also kept the house style right the way through but you need more text on the double page spread to cover the large white spaces. Apart from this, its good!"
Brittany Williams: "Everything's fine except on the third page the pictures aren't the right size as they look a bit stretched and faded which pixellates them so correct these and the magazine will look even better"
Lizzie Harkin: "I think it's good that you've stuck with the house style and gave your audience and buyers the option with the instagram, facebook and twittter icons which shows this magazine goes to a wide audience. I am not too keen on the tilted images though. Thats all i can really pick out. Other than that, I really do like your magazine"
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